写作语言及组织

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　一次，他在核实数据时，认为部分数据需要重新测量，但项目部的车都被派出去了。

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　评分标准：

　1 content 2 language 3 structure & vocabulary 4 organisation

　展开论述上面的 4 个方面 1 内容的完整性 2 语言

　 6C 原则 1 ．准确(correctness)

　包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确措词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确。

　 (1) 恰当的语言风格

　请比较下面两组例词：

　 Formal

　 Informal

　一次，他在核实数据时，认为部分数据需要重新测量，但项目部的车都被派出去了。

　approximately

　inquire

　ascertain

　obtain

　assist

　participate

　construct

　purchase

　 contribute

　 sufficient

　difficult

　utilize

　About Ask find out receive help share build buy give enough hard use

　(2) 准确的措词和信息

　 (3) 正确的语法和标点符号

　(4) 正确的拼写

　 2 ．清楚(Clarity)

　(1) 逻辑布局(Logical Organization)

　常用的逻辑布局方法包括：

　 ① 因果关系(Cause & Effect)

　 itio n in g o f su p p o rt a n d h a n g e r d e sig n ta k e fu lly in to a cco u n t th e e x p a n sio n sp a ce a n d in su la tio n th ick n e ss. La rg e -d ia m e te r p ip e s a fte r h e a t p re se rv a tio n p la ste rin g co n stru ctio n o f v a lv e s, tu rb in e , ch e ck in g sm o o th su rfa ce , h ig h te m p e ra tu re p o w d e r p a in t fu lly d ry a fte r. P ro te ctiv e co v e rin g s fo r e le ctric e q u ip m e n t in su la tio n b o a rd s d e sig n e d w ith p re ssu re p la te , w h e n o rd e rin g a cco rd in g to th e in sta lla tio n d ia g ra m , m o d e l sp e cifica tio n s p u b lish in g o rd e r, e n su re w h e n in sta llin g co rn e rs n e a t, u n ifo rm a p p e a ra n ce , re d u ce th e a m o u n t o f o n -site m a ch in in g . B e fo re v a lv e s, fla n g e in su la tio n sh e ll co n stru ctio n , b e su re to m a k e a u n ifie d m o d e l, a ll v a lv e s, fla n g e s, in su la tio n co v e r u n ifie d , tid y a n d b e a u tifu l. W h e n fo u r p a rts su ch a s p ip e s, b o ile r in su la tio n , m u st d o first a rticle in sp e ctio n , p ro o f o f d e sig n a n d co n stru ctio n m e th o d s, te ch n o lo g y ca n m e e t th e te ch n o lo g ica l re q u ire m e n ts, b e fo re e x te n siv e co n stru ctio n . B o ile r ste e l b e a m s, d o o r o p e n in g b o x e s d e sig n e d w ith in su la tio n g a sk e ts, fla n g e ca n n o t b e o b liq u e , e v e n fa ste n e d . B a ck in to th e slo p e o f th e tu b in g d u rin g in sta lla tio n p a y a tte n tio n to th e p ip in g , o il sta tio n is a lo w p o in t. R e fu e lin g m u st b e co n tro lle d w h e n ca stin g m a te ria l p a rts, se le ct lo w th e rm a l co n d u ctiv ity m a te ria ls a s fa r a s p o ssib le , e n su re th a t th e se p a rts d o n o t o v e rh e a t. 6 .3 q u a lity d e fe cts o f in su la tio n te ch n o lo g y m a n a g e m e n t o p tim iza tio n o f co n stru ctio n p ro ce ss a n d d e v e lo p a re a so n a b le d u ra tio n , re g io n a l tra n sfe r o f strictly

　 ② 时间顺序 (Chronological Development)

　 ③ 序列顺序(Sequential Development)

　 ④ 比较(Comparison)

　 ⑤ 一般到特殊 (From General to Specific)

　 ⑥ 特殊到一般般 (From Specific to General)

　 (2) 合理构架句群与段落(Well-Written Sentences & Paragraphs)

　例句：

　前修改前 : Marshall Corporation was founded forty years ago, and it now has branch offices in four states, and it employs nearly 400 individuals.

　一次，他在核实数据时，认为部分数据需要重新测量，但项目部的车都被派出去了。

　(3) 统一性与一致性(Unity and Coherence)

　(4) 强调(Emphasis)

　 ① 位置

　 ② 重复

　 ③ 数量

　 ④ 技巧

　(5) 将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。

　比较下面三对句子：

　A. They bought a bicycle in Beijing in a small shop which costs $ 25.00. They bought a bicycle for $25.00 in a small shop in Beijing. B. He was warned not to drink water even in a restaurant which had not been boiled. He was warned not to drink water which had

　(6) 避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。

　 We shall take a firm line with the firm ．

　 We shall take a strong line with the film ．

　3 ．简洁(Conciseness)

　A. We have begun to export our machine to countries abroad.

　 We have begun to export our machines. B. In the event that you speak to Mr. Wood in regard to production, ask him to give consideration to the delivery schedule.

　 If you speak to Mr. Wood about production, ask him to consider the delivery

　一次，他在核实数据时，认为部分数据需要重新测量，但项目部的车都被派出去了。

　We require new-type furniture.

　使用简洁的语言(Use simple language)

　尽量使用

　避免使用 please

　 will you be good enough to prefer

　 express a preference for because

　 for the reason that

　4 ．具体(Concreteness) (1) 尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。

　A. These brakes can stop a car within a short distance.

　 These Goodson power brakes can stop a 2-ton car within 24 feet. B. We hope the equipment will be delivered to our company as soon as possible.

　 Please deliver the equipment to our company before next Friday. C. She is a fast typist.

　 She types at the fast rate of 85 words per minute.

　(2) 使用具体词汇

　A. We have no hesitation in advising you…

　 We advise you… B. The preparation of new price scale is in hand.

　 New price scales are being prepared this week. C. Due to the unusual nature of the request,… As the request is unusual,…

　 a great deal of time, bad, large, good, small, around, old, convenient, young, little, majority, minority, most, less

　一次，他在核实数据时，认为部分数据需要重新测量，但项目部的车都被派出去了。

　 5 ．完整(Completeness)

　自查：谁(Who)? 什么(What)? 什么时候(When)? 在哪里(Where)? 为什么(Why)? 怎么样(How)?

　 6 ．礼貌(Courtesy)

　例如：

　Dear Mrs. Walters, Because you delayed so long in your response, Model GSF is off stock. If you are interested, we have some similar models on hand Yours truly,

　修改：

　If I had known your needs before May 20, I could have shipped Model GSP immediately. However, the spring sale drained our stock.

　The Model GSK, a similar instrument, is in stock, and you could have it at the same price as the GSF. It normally sells for $10,000 more. we will ship it as soon as you give us the word.

　Yours sincerely

　 (1) 使用礼貌友好的词汇 A. 说“Thank you" , 例如: Thank you for your letter of yesterday. Thank you for your prompt reply. Thank you for helping us in this respect. Thank you for your information.

　(2) 体谅对方的写作态度(You-Attitude) Writer emphasis:

　We are shipping your

　一次，他在核实数据时，认为部分数据需要重新测量，但项目部的车都被派出去了。

　Writer emphasis:

　To reduce our costs, we are changing the billing system. Reader emphasis: To provide you with clear records, we are changing our billing system.

　Writer emphasis: I was pleased to hear that the project was completed. Reader emphasis: Congratulations on successfully completing the project

　Writer emphasis: We regret that you closed your account with us a week ago. We believe that people may come back to our bank again sooner or later since we have a good credit among our customers. Reader emphasis: A week ago you closed your account with us. Whatever the reason, we are pleased to have played some small

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